Myst's Comic

[Mysteryfaith]

It didn't come out very well Dx But here it is, downized:



SCRIPT:

First box
Jayfeather sitting alone by the Moonpool as the sun rises.

First circle
Jayfeather's eyes, thoughtful and bright.

Second box
(Jayfeather's thoughts) "This isn't how it was supposed to work out. For so long I have believed a lie. The whole Clan tricked... and now death is in our ranks. StarClan..."

Third box
(Interupting Jayfeather is Leafpool) "JAYFEATHER!"

Second circle
(Jayfeather noticing his mentor and turning.

Forth Box
(Leafpool) "Jayfeather! It's time to go back. The Moonpool..."

Fifth box
(Jayfeather) "The Moonpool what? Leafpool, you know The Clan is hectic right now. With __(SPOILER)__ dead, and... I'd hardly like to return to the Clan now."

Loose box
(Leafpool) JAYFEATHER! How dare you? The dangers... you cannot run to safety! Listen to ______(SPOILER!)_____


Read Long Shadows? Then you'll know what I've put in the places where there are spoiler blocks.

[~.//нαzє\\.~]

Actually you can read it in the boxes.

[Saya~]

I read Long Shadows already!!!!!!